1) What score do you think you deserve?
I think i deserve 1 point. My research was not enough to support my thesis.
2) What did you do well?
The rationale of my essay is logic.
The rationale of my essay is logic.
3) What could you have done better?
When i was writing the essay, I felt there's not enough information to suppor my thesis. So I need to research more.
When i was writing the essay, I felt there's not enough information to suppor my thesis. So I need to research more.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
My conclusion is the best among many parts of my classical argument. I think I finalize my essay well.
My conclusion is the best among many parts of my classical argument. I think I finalize my essay well.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
My confirmation is the weekest part of my essay. Due to the lack of information, it was not enough to support my thesis.
My confirmation is the weekest part of my essay. Due to the lack of information, it was not enough to support my thesis.
6) What's your strategy to make tour second draft better?
Research more to support my thesis.
Research more to support my thesis.
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