First Draft-Narration(week 7)

My persuasive argument thesis is: The Internet real-name system is an inappropriate tool to solve social problems on cyber space. 

1. What do people already know about my topic?

 Everyone knows that what it means of adopting the Internet real-name system. And what kinds of social problems occuring in cyber space are there.

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

 I have researced evidences showing the Internet real-name system is inappropriate tool to slove social problems in cyber space. I worked all these processes based on the constitution of Korea, and appication cases.
 

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

 Many are searcing for the ways to solve social problems in cyber space and the Internet real-name system is one of the uprising way. Of course, there are some advantages that the system will give to the society. However, if we adopt the Internet real-name system, some serious side effects will occured. For example, if we are trying to establish a law, this law must be established under the Korean Constitution and the same applies to the case of enforcing new system. The Internet real-name system is violating 'Chapter 2 of the Constitution, Article 17' and 'Chapter 21 of the Constitution, Article 1'. Even if the system increase the credibility and contribute to ordered cyber culture, there will be inevitable side effects due to its serious problems and hence taking a risk is not an effective and appropriate way.

Narration

  I would like to point out the double-sidedness of Internet real-name system, especially the advantages of this system, before let you read why I am on the negative side of adopting the Internet real-name system. As everyting has two sides like good and evil is co-existing, the Internet real-name system has double-sidedness as well.

 Let's look at the advantages of Internet real-name system. Since the Internet real-name system force Internet users to reveal their real name, their credibility will be increase and it is useful when they forgot their own ID.(their real name and own ID is same.) Also, for managers of Website, the system will give them the great convenience of managing their customer and because people's real name is revealed directly they will be more careful in using Internet. Thus, the system will play an important role in forming ordered Interent culture.
 Judging by the advantages of it, it seems that there is no reason to oppose the system. However, some problems that the Internet real-name system give us reconsideration of adopting Internet real-name system. Since those problems will inevitably cause an outcome which is most likely the serious side effect. Adoping the system with taking the side effect is not an effective and appropriate answer to cyber problematic situation at all. That is why knowing its exact double-sidedness and the effect plays significant role for whether adopting the Internet real-name system or not.